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Feedback for "To Sever" Story Arc - Mystica - 12-17-2013
Part One
Part Two
Part Three
I'm not usually one to ask for feedback, but I'm genuinely curious to see what others think of my latest story arc, which will be concluded soon. I'm usually a narrative type of guy, so I wanted to get suggestions/comments on my work. It will assist me in my latest endeavor of possibly writing a full-length book based on Mystica.
Do forgive the lack of formatting on Part Two. I was in a rush that day and didn't allot myself time to colour code the dialogue and such.
Any and all comments welcome. Fire away, my friends.