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What am I doing wrong? - Cam Lang - 10-10-2013
If I could have some general feedback from anyone who's willing to give it, that'd be awesome. I'm hoping with the start of a new angle which I'm doing, that it'll add more character and I will be able to improve and also I'm taking bit of a break.
In terms of the trios match, I don't remember reading one bit of offence about myself and basically seeing my ass being kicked the ENTIRE time, regardless I know it takes a lot of time and effort to write those shows and we all appreciate it and congrats to the new trios champions but I'm wondering if there's ANYTHING I can do to improve...
What am I doing wrong? - John Msdison 2.Faggot - 10-10-2013
I don't think there's anything "wrong" you're doing.
3 vs 3 vs 3 matches are a pain to write. Usually, anything that goes beyond four competitors, I just write freely without taking into consideration who ranked where. The only exception is when it comes down to the final 3 at the end which happened to be Diaz/Mystica/ESP.
I tried to get offence in from everyone. I thought I had you hit some big moves.
If I didn't then I apologize. I have a difficult time tracking who's doing what in those big ones. I often have people get "thrown to the outside" in order to simulate off-camera back and forth brawling taking place. I guess I can try to put more emphasis on that in the future.
You definitely weren't at the bottom this week in the match. If you wish to know where you ranked then shoot me a PM and I'll give you a rough idea.
What am I doing wrong? - LJ Havok - 10-10-2013
had the same problem, dude. I took some time off and did things to help with my character and now my ideas are flooding in..
I actually have some ideas for the future too so PM me as well
What am I doing wrong? - John Msdison 2.Faggot - 10-10-2013
Never hurts to create a side character with a completely different personality from your main.
What am I doing wrong? - Ann Thraxx - 10-10-2013
In honesty, I haven't read much of your work, lately. That's just me. It's not like I single your work out to avoid or anything. Lol.
But, I think what Madison said about the big matches is true. I've been in big matches before (especially as Shana) and felt left out a couple of times, but generally they try to give you a decent spot in the match. If it doesn't happen, it doesn't happen and your efforts still count just the same.
I think you should just sit down and build up an interesting story idea. Maybe a slight shift in gimmick. See how that goes. Experimental, I suppose. Just do something you're at least partially comfortable with, but trying new ideas is great.
What am I doing wrong? - Peter Fn Gilmour - 10-10-2013
u did great work dude. we all did.. dont change a thing.
now can i get some feedback?
RE: What am I doing wrong? - Tony Santos - 10-10-2013
(10-10-2013, 06:23 PM)Peter Fn Gilmour Said: u did great work dude. we all did.. dont change a thing.
now can i get some feedback?
This isn't your thread to ask for feedback...
RE: What am I doing wrong? - Jessie-ica Diaz - 10-10-2013
(10-10-2013, 06:23 PM)Peter Fn Gilmour Said: u did great work dude. we all did.. dont change a thing.
now can i get some feedback?
Bastardo.
What am I doing wrong? - Liz Hathaway - 10-10-2013
He did not just ask for feedback in Cam's feedback thread. What a dick.
What am I doing wrong? - Peter Fn Gilmour - 10-10-2013
least i got one
What am I doing wrong? - AlexandraCallaway - 10-10-2013
Yeah that was a douche move... this thread isn't about you.. it's about Cam!
What am I doing wrong? - Peter Fn Gilmour - 10-10-2013
i made one just now