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quick feedback please? - Mr. Radio - 09-29-2013
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=7100&pid=28148#pid28148 it was kind of small but i was short on time so can I have some thoughts on it?
quick feedback please? - John Austin - 10-04-2013
Hate I didn't get around to this until now but I thought it was good. Small yet you told a good story and continued with the saga of Zak / Radio / Minxs etc...
One small suggestion is that instead of using that red you used...maybe use a brighter color. It was just a little hard for me to read at first that's all.
But I love reading your work and other than what I mentioned...I seen nothing really wrong with.
