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Feedback on this Thing? - Jessie-ica Diaz - 07-30-2013
So, I was rereading some of Your Angel's stuff today, and that, along with Evertrust and The Beatles, inspired me to write this piece. Thoughts?
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5037
Feedback on this Thing? - Jessie-ica Diaz - 07-31-2013
2nd piece of this little saga: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5050
Anyone?
Feedback on this Thing? - Peter Lake - 07-31-2013
I read the first one and enjoyed it a lot. I think you did a great job with the narrative. It's a very cerebral piece which I dig. Your pacing is really on point too. What I commend you for is taking a risk. I think when you're roleplaying week to week it's easy to fall into a formula for what works, so kudos to you for trying something different and expanding the character.