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Feedback on my first RP please. - Ricky Desmond - 07-17-2013
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=4666
This is my first piece under my new character. It's brief, and it's to the point. I wanted to get my character's traits across in my opening RP, what do you guys think of it? What direction would you take with my character?
Feedback on my first RP please. - #MemeQueen Luca Torchwick - 07-17-2013
Stop being awesome, I'm trying to hate you!
With that said, really good piece. I'm looking forward for what's to come. Sorry if that's not very good feedback, but there really isn't much I can say about it that's bad. Also, I may or may not have laughed harder than I should've at "Let's face it.... She's hot as fuck."
Feedback on my first RP please. - Ricky Desmond - 07-17-2013
Haha cheers mate. Trying to bring more humour into my work as my last character was way too serious.
Glad you liked it though, haha loved the rep as well. More to come, including a response to a certain RP
