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This, right? No? Anybody? - Stevie Tyler - 06-28-2013
Emissary
Thoughts?
This, right? No? Anybody? - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 06-28-2013
Good start, I wanted more description of where your character was and what his surroundings were etc. What he was wearing and stuff. I like it when the writer paints a picture for my imagination. Nice dialogue though.
This, right? No? Anybody? - Stevie Tyler - 06-28-2013
Thanks! I'll mull that over with the next one.