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Feedback on this rp? - "The Phantom" Jack Kronus - 06-23-2013
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=3971&pid=12634#pid12634
First roleplay with this character. Just wanted to introduce Jack and his manager, Paradox. Tried to show who they were and what they were all about. I would love to hear what you think.
Feedback on this rp? - John Austin - 06-30-2013
Not bad man. I would be a little more descriptive in some things but it was a good read and I got the image.