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Need some feedback on this promo - Mr. Oz - 07-22-2020
Deals Made, Deals Never Broken
I'm wondering if this promo is good or if I have something to work on in telling the story. I feel proud of it, and feel it's some of the best I've done. However, I've had this feeling before and found that it wasn't as good as I thought. So I figure I'd ask for some feedback on what I need in terms of the story. Trash talk, I know I'm not the best or even that good, so don't worry about that part. It's the story I'm looking into.
Thanks for your time!