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Some Feedback? - #MemeQueen Luca Torchwick - 05-31-2013
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=3113&pid=10136#pid10136
I'm curious to know how people feel about my most recent RP and what areas I can still improve on. Please, be as brutal as possible. Thanks in advance.
Some Feedback? - Alex Shawn - 06-01-2013
Needs more bewbs
Jk I like it
Some Feedback? - Crimson Cobra - 06-01-2013
Trying to be brutal and all i can think of is how good it was. I liked the angle of the drug selling, i liked how you showed that one of the friends really seems to know Luca by having him guess the meth correctly. Its all pretty interesting, the only difficulty i encountered was telling who was who in the first part, it was easy to guess that they were all different friends but from someone who had never read one of your rps before I didn't exactly know who they were. But again great work man I enjoyed it.