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Grande Feedback? - Grande Ricardo - 10-27-2017
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=29523
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=29573
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=29634
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=29691
I know he's a little off, and his facts aren't accurate, but that's all purposeful. Other than that, I did I do?
Grande Feedback? - "The Wolf of Afghanistan" Joshua Schuler - 10-30-2017
Welcum Mike: I enjoyed it a lot, wish it would have been a little longer, but whatever. Love the not giving a fuck attitude involving the match. It was pretty fucking humorous! I'm not sure who your opponents were or any of the matches background. It flowed well and read smoothly. I'm a fan of Mike so far.
Drezdin can eat my ass whole: It was some good ole fashion roast and I enjoyed it like a fat kid loves cake. Again could have been longer. Also, it lacked a little scene for my taste personally. All the references, epic, grand choices. More Mike will always be a good thing, lol. At least he was mentioned. Interested in reading more of the Grande and Mike tales.
Celebrating, and you can't tell me otherwise: My second favorite of the first three, Welcum Mike my first. Even though poop is elementary it will always be funny. Your main characters seem to be all about fuckery and I am loving it. Grande is so into his own little world and just misunderstood. It's a humorously gross romance, sharing poops with a loved one, I'm chuckling as I am writing this.
*When I read the rest of the ones you have posted, I will give my input. I am not the best at giving advice and feedback. I'll also just edit this post.