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Feedback request/explanation for my last RP - Alexis Riot - 11-10-2016
Hello everyone!
Some of you may be wondering what is up with the last RP I posted. Just in case you haven't seen it, here's a link: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=25528
If you're reading on I'm just going to assume you've already read it.
So first off, I'm not retiring as a writer. I hope to spend many more years in the XWF, but I am planning on having Riot's match next Savage Sunday Night be her last. You see, I've just been completely clueless on future plans for her. I burned all my good ideas out too early and now I'm at a bit of a roadblock when it comes to her character and storylines. Unlike last time, however, I didn't want Riot to just suddenly disappear; I wanted there to be a bit of a storyline, hence the retirement angle.
After Alexis Riot wrestles her last match, I'm planning on mainly sticking around with Jervis Cottonbelly until I feel I have a good idea and storyline plans for my next character, so some advice on what makes an interesting character and how to create various storylines around them for RPs without burning out would be very much appreciated.
Now that all that's out of the way, I want to know how you guys felt about my RP. I tried making it seem more sporadic and out of nowhere than the usual promo, as this is an out of nowhere retirement, hence the many different subjects and long winded speeches. If this came across well or just served to make it a challenge to understand, feel free to let me know.
Thanks!
Feedback request/explanation for my last RP - drezdin5788 - 11-10-2016
Just do what I do, if any ideas come out right them down
Feedback request/explanation for my last RP - Thomas Nixon - 11-10-2016
When you start your new character, figure out your motivation to be a wrestler first. I've been burnt out because I've made a really interesting character but it didn't make sense for them to be a wrestler. So give them a carrot to chase after, and try not to let it just be the main title.