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First RP: What do you think? - Marilyn Starr - 04-24-2016
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Hey guys! I signed up a few months ago and flaked. Sorry for that, first of all: life got in the way hard but things have stabilized and I'm here for the long run. So, because of that, I'd love to know what you guys thought of my first RP.
First RP: What do you think? - Jon Willis - 04-25-2016
I really liked it. You seem to really have a good grasp on your character and where you want to take her, but more importantly, how you're going to get her there. I also liked how it clearly shows that you researched Frodo, Rebel, and even me to get our styles and mannerisms down. You had some pretty good one-liners there, too, like the line about Rebel trying to call someone a Barbie given her origins. That was awesome.
I look forward to seeing what you'll cook up next.