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Monday Madness rp - Marek Matthews - 05-25-2015
Hey guys,
I am looking for feedback on my latest roleplay for Madness.
Here it is
Thanks!
Lee
Monday Madness rp - Game Girl - 05-25-2015
It was pretty good, I like your trash talk. Reminds me of old school WWF and WCW promos, which is cool. Only problems with it, you could use some colour. Maybe just for when Marek speaks or do just the names before they speak in colour. Like this:
MAREK MATTHEWS: "blahblahblah"
Another thing is don't make your paragraphs too long. Walls of text can be hard to read sometimes. Apart from those 2 things, you're doing well.
Monday Madness rp - Marek Matthews - 05-25-2015
Hey!
Thanks for the suggestions. I appreciate it.
Lee