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Muddy Waters needs your feedback! - Muddy Waters - 04-13-2015
Give feedback, earn money, help Muddy!
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=19514
Muddy Waters needs your feedback! - Vincent Lane - 04-13-2015
I like it, man. The character is unique enough that it's interesting, and you come up with some good colloquialisms to use throughout.
It's funny even though it's over the top - maybe BECAUSE it's over the top.
I probably need more back story to understand why Muddy is travelling with his daughter and such, but other than that I really liked it.
re:Muddy Waters needs your feedback! - Muddy Waters - 04-13-2015
Thanks Vinnie,
I posted my first RP in the feedback forum about a week ago- no one gave feeback though. This gives a lot more of Muddy's back story if you're interested:
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=19471
Muddy Waters needs your feedback! - Vincent Lane - 04-13-2015
Oh, cool... I never actually saw that. I'l check it out later.