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Feedback Please - Jaws - 12-11-2014

Hey everyone, I just finished my first promo for my match on madness. I really like it here in the XWF and hopefully I stick around a while. Tell me what you think of it!

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=17287


Feedback Please - El Tiburón - 12-11-2014

Not a fan of the shark costume idea, but the RP was pretty good.

But as a huge fan of the movie Jaws, please please please appropriately quote the "dolls eyes" part to Quint.


re:Feedback Please - Robo Shove-it 5000 - 12-11-2014

(12-11-2014, 12:07 PM)El Tiburón Said: Not a fan of the shark costume idea, but the RP was pretty good.

Not a costume. He's an alien. That's his real body. ICly that is.

Also, I liked it, Jaws. Nice promo. Though as Tiburon says, (even though I would believe Jaws probably has heard the line on his planet, or another planet, or even this planet sans movie) make sure to credit the "fisherman" aka Quint. Jaws might not know his name, but some people do.


re:Feedback Please - Vincent Lane - 12-11-2014

(12-11-2014, 12:15 PM)Robo Shove-it 5000 Said:
(12-11-2014, 12:07 PM)El Tiburón Said: Not a fan of the shark costume idea, but the RP was pretty good.

Not a costume. He's an alien. That's his real body. ICly that is.

Also, I liked it, Jaws. Nice promo. Though as Tiburon says, (even though I would believe Jaws probably has heard the line on his planet, or another planet, or even this planet sans movie) make sure to credit the "fisherman" aka Quint. Jaws might not know his name, but some people do.

From his bio:

"Ring Attire: A full, realistic looking shark costume, complete with tail."


re:Feedback Please - Jaws - 12-11-2014

I will surely change it. Thanks for your feedback gentlemen and I'm sorry to El Tiburon for stealing your gimmick Tongue


re:Feedback Please - Jaws - 12-11-2014

Also, another thing for GM's. I know that an Alien Shark is not really suitable for madness so that's why I made it a shark suit, is that okay?


Feedback Please - Ozymandias - 12-11-2014

It doesn't matter to us one way or the other whether the character is an alien or a giant shark or a guy in a shark costume. Obviously if he is the former than he would need to stay on Warfare or Shove It but if he is the latter then he could be on any of the shows. But ultimately it is up to you and what you want to do with your character.


re:Feedback Please - El Tiburón - 12-11-2014

(12-11-2014, 01:27 PM)Jaws Said: I will surely change it. Thanks for your feedback gentlemen and I'm sorry to El Tiburon for stealing your gimmick Tongue

Lol I'm glad you got the joke.