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Feedback pretty please! - Game Girl - 10-02-2014

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=15804

What did you guys think? Pros, cons all that. Smile


re:Feedback pretty please! - Mr. Oz - 10-02-2014

I liked it.

One con, coming from your opponent, is, how does Ghost Tank know he's being talked about? How do we see what's happening with Game Boy?

It's nitpicky, I know. Again, I did like it. Especially his reaction to Ghost Tank's name.


Feedback pretty please! - Game Girl - 10-02-2014

lol I get it, well just imagine my RP was filmed. And just give your reply to it. I understand how it can be hard to respond to a video game character but you can put it down to camera trickery and CGI and stuff. I liked your RP too, hopefully we can have a lot of fun this week Smile


re:Feedback pretty please! - Pest - 10-02-2014

It's pretty good, it's easily explained how we see it. It's always being filmed. I don't always discuss their being a camera following me, but we all kind of know it. You seem very naive and trusting, which I think could play well.


Feedback pretty please! - Game Girl - 10-02-2014

Thanks man.

Yeah Game Boy is the generic good guy so he is very trusting and only wants to help. It could play well into someone trying to help but leading him down the wrong path, it'll make a good story too.


Feedback pretty please! - Pest - 10-02-2014

Hold is the Princess supposed to be, anyway?


Feedback pretty please! - Game Girl - 10-02-2014

How old? Around 19, Game Boy is meant to be 17.


Feedback pretty please! - Pest - 10-02-2014

Too old, we're not gonna do that collab idea I had.