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What do you think of my very first piece? - RichardWestonKielich - 06-27-2014
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=13165
Exactly what it says on the tin. This is the first thing I've written with the character and while I thought it was great when I posted it, going over it a few times since then it's started to lose its luster so to speak. So, I'm curious as to what anyone else thinks about it. Please, be as brutal as possible.