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Any Feedback? - XLDIGJYTRWWWQ - 03-01-2013 I am targeting a very 'unique' character here. Hopefully, I haven't stuck the landing. http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=1123 What do you think? If you think it's nonsense... essentially I've achieved my goal. My character is a dyslexic, disassociated individual. I'm trying to introduce him as a huge outburst of energy, hoping to 'even-keel' him out once I get my first opponent. What do you think of one of these first pieces? Any Feedback? - KnightMask - 03-01-2013 He's definitely crazy...he makes KnightMask's pal Ratboy looked tame by comparison. LOL! BTW, is that what your character looks like, the dude in your signature? Just trying to get a sense. Any Feedback? - XLDIGJYTRWWWQ - 03-01-2013 Indeed it is. That is my picbase. Any Feedback? - KnightMask - 03-01-2013 LOL! Yeah, that's definitely a bizarre pic-base. I'd say its working. I think some promos would be interesting, if you have the time, just to really establish how he operates in a setting. Although, the stuff you've been has definitely been getting the insanity across well. |