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#1
12-30-2013, 06:24 AM

Would anyone mind giving a little feedback for my last few RPs? Would be greatly appreciated!

Part 1
Part 2
Finale

Thanks in advance.
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Smoke Away
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#2
12-30-2013, 08:56 AM

...Anybody? Tongue
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#3
12-30-2013, 08:58 AM

I checked out parts 1 and 2 and I thought you did good. No mistakes really jump out at me. I liked how you referenced the history in your second part, that's always good to see in trash talk. It adds more force behind the punch than people think.
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