In the past I have made threads for others' work, giving my opinion.

Nova [concerning the font color, which was hard to read, but only due to my using my tv set as a "computer monitor"]
-- http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6370

Alex [concerning the title, which was "Within You", the name of a song by David Bowie]
-- http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6151

Cam [concerning the work itself]
-- http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6375

Eli [concerning the work itself]
-- http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6411

I have been told repeatedly not to make threads devoted to others' work. So I'm not. Instead, I'm taking a cue from Archie "Not Bunker" Lawson, and making this thread instead. If you care for my opinion, which most of you probably don't... I'm usually intent on reading as many roleplays as possible here. So if I haven't read yours already... I will, and I'll let you know what I think. I've been fedding since approx. 2000, and writing is my number one passion. Hopefully, after I've proven myself through my writing... one or two of you will be interested in running a piece by me. Looking forward to it.

~ $hane |-|orn 3ryant