I don't really do this since a lot of times...I don't really care but with this place being filled with extremely talented writers who, I swear could become the next JK Rowling....I would like some serious feedback on my latest rp.

It can be how much you like it, how much you hate it and what I should improve on. It would be greatly loved if you guys could let me know...and help me improve as a writer.

Hunting Grounds

Well, I just realized it's an open roleplay.

And people have responded.

I feel like an idiot.

Which is nothing new.

... though.
I think I'll have some fun...

<3

Absolutely great. I'm not so good at the feedback sort of thing but I will say that I went and read every new post to keep up to date with it :3

I've read a few... about to read all of them...

Then... I'm going to contribute.

Stay tuned...

I'll just say, quickly, while still reading--

Vlad & Claudia.

I know none of you know of them... but that's immediately who I'm reminded of, with Micah and Zak...

I haven't felt this at home in a fed since I was in XAW...

... going to try and put together a decent roleplay in response to this. Just as soon as I finish reading everything...

Your style... you remind me of this gal named Brittany, from the last fed I was in, WWG. And that is a very, very good thing... she's an amazing writer. I was actually going to be roommates with her and move to Arkansas... but things didn't work out. But you definitely have the same talent she does... I like you.

I'm definitely responding to this... feeling more inspired to write now... thank you.

Radio is fuxxing adorable.

Just saying. :3

No problems on this end, love your character, very mysterious and very dark.....all I have to say is awesomeness! xD

What does that mean, I dunno but keep up the awesome work

Thank you guys so much! I was a little worried that Micah and Zak wouldn't be accepted here. This is how they were designed when I created them in Theater class.

(09-01-2013, 06:52 AM)raYne Said: Radio is fuxxing adorable.

Just saying. :3

Did you just fucking call me adorable!?
Jk, Radio is meant to show his soft side when it comes to Micah now.

Oh and I had fun writing with you, it turned out to be an interesting...Story.

Lol yes it did. I have a feeling this next one of Radio and Micah will be just as interesting.

(09-01-2013, 06:31 AM)raYne Said: I'll just say, quickly, while still reading--

Vlad & Claudia.

I know none of you know of them... but that's immediately who I'm reminded of, with Micah and Zak...

I haven't felt this at home in a fed since I was in XAW...

... going to try and put together a decent roleplay in response to this. Just as soon as I finish reading everything...

Who's Vlad and Claudia?

As I've been mentioning here and there, people here remind me of people I knew in XAW... one of the first feds I was a part of, back around 2002 or so, and still one of the top three I've ever had the priveledge of working in.

Vlad and Claudia... were Dhampirs. Half human, half vampire. And raYne/Reeve had a HUUUGE rivalry with Vlad... raYne lived in a place known as the raYne Forest.

... Vlad burned it to the ground. I still remember that to this day...

You have the same ability Andrew [who played the two of them] had... which is high praise. It would be a pleasure to work with you, my dear. In any capacity... I was hoping your two could help me fill in the vacancy left by Peter in the match I'm proposing for next Monday, but as you mentioned in the thread, you'll be unavailable that date. Which is a shame... I would have loved for my debut match to be myself, Lightning & Alexandra vs Angelus, Zak and Minxxy...

But regardless-- my response to your open thread is still coming... I just keep getting sidetracked with other things here, which is another one of my bad habits... I'm very easily distracted. But I promise you-- it's coming. And I truly hope you enjoy reading it.

Take care, hun. <3

Sorry I can't face people that she's involved with. Zak and Micah are closer than family to her.

And yesh, Radio... you are adorable.

Deal with it.

<3

Ally Cat, I already knew Minxxy couldn't be involved-- she opted out of the show.

I have an idea... a wonderfully, BRILLIANT, beautiful idea...

... I just hope it works.

#stay_tuned

Lol

Now I'm Ally Cat... *giggles* YAY!