I know I wrote this a couple days ago but What do you guys think of it? Should I keep writing like this or change up my style a bit? Anything will help.

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=4860

come on anyone?

Whats with the mini-novel at the beginning? IMAO- there is no need for it. Had absolutely nothing to do with anybody or anything in XWF. I don't know if other are afraid to say it, but you asked.

(07-26-2013, 07:19 PM)Jonny Rebel Said: Whats with the mini-novel at the beginning? IMAO- there is no need for it. Had absolutely nothing to do with anybody or anything in XWF. I don't know if other are afraid to say it, but you asked.

That fits along with more of the style here, where promos/shit talk/whatever else it could be called CAN take a backseat to the character development/stories/whatever else it could be called as long as it's more entertaining. That's how I got by when I was developing my skills in the former. Not saying your opinion is wrong by any means, just saying it's a part of the in essence style here. I have no idea if I'm making any sense anymore, so I'll just end it here.

As for you Radio, I'll hit you up later with my thoughts, yo.