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#1
07-23-2013, 03:58 PM

If people wouldn't mind, toss me some feedback about my role play. I haven't done this stuff since 2002, so I'm a little rusty. Thanks

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=4832

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07-23-2013, 08:53 PM

I honestly enjoyed it, except for the line praising the Connection. For that, Luca gon' find you, lol.

All in all however, great first piece, and I definitely want to read more of your stuff!
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#3
07-23-2013, 09:08 PM

I enjoyed the whole thing Smile
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