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Feedback wanted! Need some feedback on this promo
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07-22-2020, 01:32 PM

Deals Made, Deals Never Broken

I'm wondering if this promo is good or if I have something to work on in telling the story. I feel proud of it, and feel it's some of the best I've done. However, I've had this feeling before and found that it wasn't as good as I thought. So I figure I'd ask for some feedback on what I need in terms of the story. Trash talk, I know I'm not the best or even that good, so don't worry about that part. It's the story I'm looking into.

Thanks for your time!
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