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I need some help please.
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06-07-2020, 05:46 PM

I was wonder if any of you could give me some constructive criticism on my writing. Like what you like and what you don't like and anything I should work on. I very much appreciate it. Thank you. Smile
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06-13-2020, 06:55 PM

Sorry I haven’t reached out. I’ll get at you sometime on Monday. I’ve been a bit preoccupied as of late.
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06-13-2020, 07:05 PM

(06-07-2020, 05:46 PM)Felix Jones Said: I was wonder if any of you could give me some constructive criticism on my writing. Like what you like and what you don't like and anything I should work on. I very much appreciate it. Thank you. Smile

I'll give your most recent rp a read and shoot you a DM.
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06-16-2020, 09:18 AM

Sent your way.

**Edit: Mind you that’s all my opinion. It doesn’t carry that much weight.**
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