Again, I'm really curious to know what people think about my recent work. Thanks to everyone's who's read it and thanks in advance to anyone who gives me some feedback.

RP 2: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=3171
RP 3: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=3211
RP 4: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=3238

Honestly, there's not really anything negative that anyone can say. Your roleplays are always great, they're very vividly written. The dialogue is always well written and your attention to detail is incredible. You basically make the roleplay as easy to read as possible with the way you set up the setting and the details, and you make it easy for the reader to imagine the scene taking place. There's literally nothing that anyone could talk about negatively, at least in my eyes there's not. Sorry that this doesn't really help but it's all I can think of for feedback

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