MrVyper
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP
XWF FanBase:
Heel w/ Cult Following
(the heel you love to love; does whatever they want)
(Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Thu May 09 2013
Posts: 64
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05-23-2013, 07:19 AM
I've genuinely never put anything on 'Important!' before but the reason I chose to is because I need pretty much immediate feedback for this just simply because I need to know if people think I'm heading in the right direction with my character.
Obviously, you'll say that I should decide for myself but I feel people who can read my work and relate to it can sometimes tell me what to improve on or the good bits in which I should expand on and so forth. So this will be one of my last posts in this section for a while but just if anyone could tell me because I really enjoyed writing it but I'm not sure whether people like reading it and at the end of the day, I'm writing for the victory and to entertain so every little bit of Feedback helps.
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=2963
So there is the link, if you have the time to have a look over and give me, even if its in bullet point fashion, just any type of feedback it would be extremely appreciated. Thankyou for welcoming me and I am enjoying my time here, very very much.
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"The leader of the egotistical society, the prosecutor of the weak, leader of the great."
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I am, "The Serpent"
ZAYNE VYPER
Match Record
Win| Loss | Draw
5 | 2 | 0
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Match Record:
Warfare: defeated Frost & SVD via High&Dry
Shove It: defeated Intemporaliter Scelestus w/ Swift Ion
High Stakes: defeated Dean Moxley via High&Dry
High Stakes: defeated by The Crimson Knights via escaping the cage.
Warfare: defeated Kristen Silver via Lights Out
Madness: defeated Danny Danger & Jonathyn Davydson via High and Dry.
Warfare: defeated by Peter Gilmour via pin-fall.
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KnightMask
One half of Crimson Knights
XWF FanBase:
Some of everyone
(cheered; very rarely plays dirty; many likable qualities)
(Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Tue Feb 19 2013
Posts: 211
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05-23-2013, 09:46 AM
Bro.
News flash. Your RP. Was. Frigging. Awesome. And I really, really mean that. I love the storyline, I love the back story...good job buddy. Please keep going in the direction you are headed. Because I really am enjoying it.
I also liked the dream with the fangs and stuff.
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MrVyper
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP
XWF FanBase:
Heel w/ Cult Following
(the heel you love to love; does whatever they want)
(Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Thu May 09 2013
Posts: 64
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05-23-2013, 02:05 PM
Actually coming from you that means a lot! I'm not just saying that, I love your work and decided that I had to put more into my work when I saw the effort you put into the recent pieces in the Tag Title match. I am a avid admirer of your work and you along with a few others inspired this promo.
So I guess I am glad you commented, but yeah thanks man, I'll keep it up if theres literally anything, as minute or as large as you like I could change I would welcome changing it.
Good luck for our match btw, I think I'll need it.
"The leader of the egotistical society, the prosecutor of the weak, leader of the great."
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I am, "The Serpent"
ZAYNE VYPER
Match Record
Win| Loss | Draw
5 | 2 | 0
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Match Record:
Warfare: defeated Frost & SVD via High&Dry
Shove It: defeated Intemporaliter Scelestus w/ Swift Ion
High Stakes: defeated Dean Moxley via High&Dry
High Stakes: defeated by The Crimson Knights via escaping the cage.
Warfare: defeated Kristen Silver via Lights Out
Madness: defeated Danny Danger & Jonathyn Davydson via High and Dry.
Warfare: defeated by Peter Gilmour via pin-fall.
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Peter Fn Gilmour
the man with the SUPER DICK
XWF FanBase:
Hardcore, psycho fans
(cheered for breaking rules and bones; excessively violent; creative with weapons)
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Joined: Tue Jan 01 2013
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05-23-2013, 06:51 PM
Mine was better! Lol Jk dude u did a good job
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SUCK... MY... DICK!
3X Star of the Month
Former 3x Hart Champion
Former 13X Xtreme Champion
Former 6X Tag Champion
Former 2X Trios Champion
Former 2x Heavy Metal Weight Champion
Former Universal Champion
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MrVyper
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP
XWF FanBase:
Heel w/ Cult Following
(the heel you love to love; does whatever they want)
(Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Thu May 09 2013
Posts: 64
20,546
Likes Given: 9
Likes Received: 19 in 14 posts
Hates Given: 0
Hates Received: 0 in 0 posts
Hates Given: 0
Hates Received: 0 in 0 posts
Reputation:
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05-24-2013, 06:22 AM
(05-23-2013, 06:51 PM)Peter Gilmour Said: Mine was better! Lol Jk dude u did a good job
Cheers buddy. Good luck in our match, hopefully we'll have a one on one soon. Thankyou for the speedy reply.
If anybody else has anything to add I'd be delighted to hear it?
"The leader of the egotistical society, the prosecutor of the weak, leader of the great."
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I am, "The Serpent"
ZAYNE VYPER
Match Record
Win| Loss | Draw
5 | 2 | 0
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Match Record:
Warfare: defeated Frost & SVD via High&Dry
Shove It: defeated Intemporaliter Scelestus w/ Swift Ion
High Stakes: defeated Dean Moxley via High&Dry
High Stakes: defeated by The Crimson Knights via escaping the cage.
Warfare: defeated Kristen Silver via Lights Out
Madness: defeated Danny Danger & Jonathyn Davydson via High and Dry.
Warfare: defeated by Peter Gilmour via pin-fall.
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