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Frodo mother fucking Smackins
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02-11-2015, 04:46 PM
Read it, was good. Glad you're doing more story. Pretty decent trash. I'd spell check more, and honestly, I hate the new picbase. I think Emma Watson is one of the most overhyped girls to exist. But, the RP was good. I'd just spell check more.
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Caroline O'Hara Burchill
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02-11-2015, 04:56 PM
Lol. It's all just a matter of opinion! XD I should definitely spell check more. I just make silly errors and mistakes because I am on my tablet, so I do apologize for that! Still, thank you for the honest feedback.
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02-11-2015, 05:21 PM
I really enjoyed it, as I do all your work. I like your writing style and I think it's going to see you have success in the near future. Also, I love the new pic base. So much so that I think Caroline and Swann should hook up. It's a match made in perfect heaven.
Credit to my good buddy Justin Sane for the banner.
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02-11-2015, 05:24 PM
Yeah Frodo is silly.
Swann, are you really hitting on someone in an OOC feedback thread? You dog.
And Caroline, it was really good. You seem to be improving with each RP and that is awesome. Story is getting better, trash is good. Thumbs up.
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02-11-2015, 05:33 PM
Don't be jealous Gator <3 xx
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02-11-2015, 05:35 PM
Omg, I was fangirling when I saw that Y2J was Swann's pic base. Lmao, as for Swann and Caroline hooking up... we shall see in the future.
Still, thanks for the feedback!
Thank you to you as well, Gator!
I'm glad you guys enjoyed my piece.
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02-11-2015, 08:08 PM
(02-11-2015, 04:51 PM) Doctor Louis DVille Said: Frodo just hates all white girls. Don't take offense. As much as I adore AJ Lee, I like the new pic base.
As much as I love Emma Watson as an actress, I just don't see the allure of her looks. But, yeah, like I said, and everyone else echoed, you're really good and I hope to see great things come to you. Maybe you win and take Gator's title. Also, Swann. Frodo fell for Caroline first!
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Hank Lane
Ezekiel
Dimallisher
caliban
Levi Storm
Michael McBride
Mandii Rider
Mastermind/Jasmine
Matt Damon
Joey Hawkins
Mark Flynn
Maria Brink
Adam Cabana
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Randalf, of the Mafia Men
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02-11-2015, 08:27 PM
Hands off, both you and Doc. She's mine.
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02-11-2015, 08:31 PM
(02-11-2015, 08:27 PM) Justin Sane Said: Hands off, both you and Doc. She's mine.
#ClingyBoyfriend
But yeah, I'd give you some feedback if... the thread... wasn't... deleted. Ah well, I'll just give you some feedback when the thread is back up.
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02-11-2015, 08:31 PM
#goshitonabelt
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02-11-2015, 08:37 PM
(02-11-2015, 08:31 PM) Justin Sane Said: #goshitonabelt
T~T
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Caroline O'Hara Burchill
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02-13-2015, 09:51 AM
(02-11-2015, 08:31 PM) Maverick Said: (02-11-2015, 08:27 PM) Justin Sane Said: Hands off, both you and Doc. She's mine.
#ClingyBoyfriend
But yeah, I'd give you some feedback if... the thread... wasn't... deleted. Ah well, I'll just give you some feedback when the thread is back up.
Just re-uploaded it a few minutes ago. Here you go!
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=17244