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Caroline O'Hara Burchill · **02-11-2015, 04:11 PM**

First and foremost, I didn't come up with the coding for the note Amy made for Caroline, so credit to this person for allowing the usage of the code for RPs! Their credit is intact, which is the 'xoxo' that is on the note.

Comments, criticism and anything else is greatly appreciated!

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=18470

~~Frodo mother fucking Smackins~~ · **02-11-2015, 04:46 PM**

Read it, was good. Glad you're doing more story. Pretty decent trash. I'd spell check more, and honestly, I hate the new picbase. I think Emma Watson is one of the most overhyped girls to exist. But, the RP was good. I'd just spell check more.

**Doctor Louis D'Ville** · **02-11-2015, 04:51 PM**

Frodo just hates all white girls. Don't take offense. As much as I adore AJ Lee, I like the new pic base.

Caroline O'Hara Burchill · **02-11-2015, 04:56 PM**

Lol. It's all just a matter of opinion! XD I should definitely spell check more. I just make silly errors and mistakes because I am on my tablet, so I do apologize for that! Still, thank you for the honest feedback.

Xavier Swann · **02-11-2015, 05:21 PM**

I really enjoyed it, as I do all your work. I like your writing style and I think it's going to see you have success in the near future. Also, I love the new pic base. So much so that I think Caroline and Swann should hook up. It's a match made in perfect heaven.

Gator · **02-11-2015, 05:24 PM**

Yeah Frodo is silly.

Swann, are you really hitting on someone in an OOC feedback thread? You dog.

And Caroline, it was really good. You seem to be improving with each RP and that is awesome. Story is getting better, trash is good. Thumbs up.

Justin Sane · **02-11-2015, 05:33 PM**

Don't be jealous Gator <3 xx

Caroline O'Hara Burchill · **02-11-2015, 05:35 PM**

Omg, I was fangirling when I saw that Y2J was Swann's pic base. Lmao, as for Swann and Caroline hooking up... we shall see in the future. Wink

Still, thanks for the feedback!

Thank you to you as well, Gator! Smile

I'm glad you guys enjoyed my piece.

~~Frodo mother fucking Smackins~~ · **02-11-2015, 08:08 PM**

(02-11-2015, 04:51 PM)Doctor Louis DVille Said: Frodo just hates all white girls. Don't take offense. As much as I adore AJ Lee, I like the new pic base.

As much as I love Emma Watson as an actress, I just don't see the allure of her looks. But, yeah, like I said, and everyone else echoed, you're really good and I hope to see great things come to you. Maybe you win and take Gator's title. Also, Swann. Frodo fell for Caroline first!

Justin Sane · **02-11-2015, 08:27 PM**

Hands off, both you and Doc. She's mine.

Maverick · **02-11-2015, 08:31 PM**

(02-11-2015, 08:27 PM)Justin Sane Said: Hands off, both you and Doc. She's mine.

#ClingyBoyfriend

But yeah, I'd give you some feedback if... the thread... wasn't... deleted. Ah well, I'll just give you some feedback when the thread is back up.

Justin Sane · **02-11-2015, 08:31 PM**

#goshitonabelt

Maverick · **02-11-2015, 08:37 PM**

(02-11-2015, 08:31 PM)Justin Sane Said: #goshitonabelt

T~T

Caroline O'Hara Burchill · **02-13-2015, 09:51 AM**

(02-11-2015, 08:31 PM)Maverick Said:
(02-11-2015, 08:27 PM)Justin Sane Said: Hands off, both you and Doc. She's mine.

#ClingyBoyfriend

But yeah, I'd give you some feedback if... the thread... wasn't... deleted. Ah well, I'll just give you some feedback when the thread is back up.

Just re-uploaded it a few minutes ago. Here you go! http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=17244

**Vincent Lane** · **02-13-2015, 10:15 AM**

That was weird. What was that all about?

TJ Wallace · **02-13-2015, 01:23 PM**

You already know I think you're a great writer. I love the New picbase, works much better than Aj Lee.

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