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Important! Speedy response please?
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MrVyper Offline
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP


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05-23-2013, 07:19 AM

I've genuinely never put anything on 'Important!' before but the reason I chose to is because I need pretty much immediate feedback for this just simply because I need to know if people think I'm heading in the right direction with my character.

Obviously, you'll say that I should decide for myself but I feel people who can read my work and relate to it can sometimes tell me what to improve on or the good bits in which I should expand on and so forth. So this will be one of my last posts in this section for a while but just if anyone could tell me because I really enjoyed writing it but I'm not sure whether people like reading it and at the end of the day, I'm writing for the victory and to entertain so every little bit of Feedback helps.

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=2963

So there is the link, if you have the time to have a look over and give me, even if its in bullet point fashion, just any type of feedback it would be extremely appreciated. Thankyou for welcoming me and I am enjoying my time here, very very much.
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"The leader of the egotistical society, the prosecutor of the weak, leader of the great."
...
I am, "The Serpent"
ZAYNE VYPER

Match Record
Win| Loss | Draw
5 | 2 | 0
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Match Record:
Warfare: defeated Frost & SVD via High&Dry
Shove It: defeated Intemporaliter Scelestus w/ Swift Ion
High Stakes: defeated Dean Moxley via High&Dry
High Stakes: defeated by The Crimson Knights via escaping the cage.
Warfare: defeated Kristen Silver via Lights Out
Madness: defeated Danny Danger & Jonathyn Davydson via High and Dry.
Warfare: defeated by Peter Gilmour via pin-fall.
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Messages In This Thread
Speedy response please? - by MrVyper - 05-23-2013, 07:19 AM
Speedy response please? - by KnightMask - 05-23-2013, 09:46 AM
Speedy response please? - by MrVyper - 05-23-2013, 02:05 PM
Speedy response please? - by Peter Fn Gilmour - 05-23-2013, 06:51 PM
RE: Speedy response please? - by MrVyper - 05-24-2013, 06:22 AM



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