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~~Rain~~ · **06-06-2014, 03:09 PM**

NOTE: Okay. So this is now the NEW&IMPROVED 'Fair & Honest FeedBack thread, which I first created late last year after Archie made this--

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6096 | "Harsh, honest feedback".

I felt inspired, I put the original thread together.....I was a complete and total d-bag, I fucked that up, I got beheaded, same ol' song an' dance.

Now, I am back. As is this thread. It is new and improved because someone might actually be willing to ask for feedback now....Here's the original opening post.--

(09-19-2013, 01:38 AM)raYne Said: In the past I have made threads for others' work, giving my opinion.

Alex, "Within You"
-- http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6151

Eli, "The Invite"
-- http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6411

Cam, "One Way Or Another"
-- http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6375

I have been told repeatedly not to make threads devoted to others' work. So I'm not. Instead, I'm taking a cue from Archie "Not Bunker" Lawson, and making this thread. I'm usually intent on reading as many roleplays as possible here. So if I haven't read yours already... I will, and I'll let you know what I think. I've been fedding since approx. 2000, and writing is my number one passion. Hopefully, after I've proven myself through my writing... one or two of you will be interested in running a piece by me.

The post I made in the old thread upon my return here, but still nobody replied--

(06-02-2014, 10:43 AM)raYne Said: Back in business. Hoping that, now that I'm actually making an effort to change, some of you might be interested in a bit of feedback. I love reading as much as I do writing [and you all know how MUCH I love writing >< ] ...So, I would be more than happy to check out ANY work ya might have, and give you my CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

And finally, the post I made because I fuckin' loved Mr. XWF's roleplay for his match on the 6/11/14 WarFare. It was my return to the fed, where he tagged w/me [I played Jack Hoff, but my main character is raYne/Reeve]--

Quote:http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=12756 | Badah-boom.

Okay, I remember last time, I was told not to make my own threads for other peoples' roleplays. But dude...I JUST read that shit, and oh my gawd I was BUSTING UP LAUGHING!! XD

Like I said, I am SO happy that my first match is Jack Hoff teamin' with you. I haven't brought Jack into a fed in a while, but I thought I'd do something fun before I get to the 'serious' stuff. And GAWD was that roleplay fun, it hi-jacked the computer, and I do NOT even know how ya did that. I was like... O___O

But it was JAWESOME, and it inspired me tah go ahead and put together my first piece. My first RP back in Exx-Dubbya-Eff, and my first RP as The Hoffster in a few years.

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=12815

Annnd...I went ahead and put together a lil sumpin' sumpin' --

X's RP even inspired me to give Jack a layout of his own. His roleplays from '08 had their own page on AngelFire, so I took that old style layout, brought it to XWF, and cranked it to 11, letting it Hi-Jack computers just like Good Ol' Mistah X-Dub.

Now.....Y'all take it from here. Hopefully ><

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