Yeah, Morby's right. I am heavily into character development. And by that, I mean it often takes up most of my roleplay, people here have hated that fact, as have many other people in many other feds....I mean, lookit all the stuff I have goin' on in the CD section >< ....But. I ALWAYS leave the trash talk at the end, or, I'll have a bit at the start, then the 'clincher' at the end, after the CD work, that hits things home on a 'final note'....It was an excellent piece. Just another reason I respect the hell outta ya, Arch. But that's the one thing that sticks out. Easy fix, and you'll be golden.

BTW...Morby. I know it probalby won't matter by now, but I am still planning on getting you the feedback on your roleplays. I still have about ten different things of my own that I have not finished writing, have begun, but put off. And, I just started cleaning my room [which has needed it for about three days, and you don't even know how badly].....I started. Told myself I wouldn't get side-tracked by XWF. I am now on XWF.....

I get distracted easily, and disappoint even myself on the things I put off. So please do not take it personally, same goes to Petey....I'm workin' on it. Slowly, step by step, which is why I cannot bring Reeve back for the time being....Again, bottom line, it's not that I flaked, I've just been running on empty. Like, literally, I barely eat, and....I'm not gonna keep on about this, anyway. I truly apologize for letting you down, and when I can, I promise you I will give you your feedback. I'm sorry.

~Shane