I read both rps, back to back and I'm honestly intrigued. Really enjoyed the switch of perspective, from the first to the second rp. The story is legit sound and pulls you in, making you want to read more. All the characters are likeable and you really get a good sense of empathy for the main role in the story; understanding how his struggle should be perceived through his eyes, while establishing a solid foundation with the supporting cast. The trash talk in your first piece is well executed, though I am eager to read statements from El Principe's perspective. All in all, I feel your work is strong and I look forward to future material.