As most of you know I chose to go in a different direction with the way that Cadryn is written.

I moved away from the basis of my material being comedy driven, to a more serious version of Cadryn with bits of comedy.

My biggest weakness in my opinion, is my trash talk. I've always struggled with it, while I watch other guys like Caedus, Chaos, Bourbon, etc put out some of the best trash talk I've read.

So far this week I've done two RP's for my match on Savage. Both of them have been primarily focused on trash talk.

If possible, I wanted to see if you guys could check them out and let me know what you think, and give me some constructive criticism or advice on how to improve my work in the long run.

Thanks again, guys.

- Jeff