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[UPDATE-John Black-3-30-16] Fair And Honest Feedback
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#11
03-30-2016, 08:06 AM

John, your latest has shown me you've come a long way since we were both here in 2K13, back when I replied to your request for feedback. I know I always like some opinons, so here's mine for you. You've put effort into telling a story, and I'm lovin' it and looking forward to seeing where it goes. Only criticism I have is that perhaps you could put more trash talk / focus on your opponent, but you're doing well. Good luck against KK and LeStrange. Blush

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Mr. XWF's Roleplay. - by Morbid Angel - 06-09-2014, 07:36 PM
Mr. XWF's Roleplay. - by Rain - 06-09-2014, 10:39 PM
Mr. XWF's Roleplay. - by Morbid Angel - 06-10-2014, 01:10 AM
Fair And Honest Feedback - by Peter Fn Gilmour - 06-10-2014, 04:49 AM
Fair And Honest Feedback - by Rain - 06-10-2014, 12:12 PM
[UPDATE-Bourbon-3-4-16] Fair And Honest Feedback - by Ophelia - 03-30-2016, 08:06 AM



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