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Haden Oliver Thomas Offline
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#1
01-11-2014, 01:15 PM

Thoughts are welcome:

Here it is (rp1)
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Ezekiel Carter-Williams V Offline
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#2
01-11-2014, 02:02 PM

I like it a lot. Had some funny moments and what not. You should proofread though. You got a few errors there. ( I'm giving you advice on the main thing I should be doing)

Overall, good stuff man
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Haden Oliver Thomas Offline
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#3
01-11-2014, 02:07 PM

Typing on the phone is difficult :-)

Thanks for the comments and suggestions! Much appreciated.
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#4
01-11-2014, 02:15 PM

I know the struggle of typing on a phone. I've don't it a number of times actually.
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