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07-30-2013, 03:16 PM

So, I was rereading some of Your Angel's stuff today, and that, along with Evertrust and The Beatles, inspired me to write this piece. Thoughts?

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5037
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07-31-2013, 06:20 PM

2nd piece of this little saga: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5050

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07-31-2013, 06:36 PM

I read the first one and enjoyed it a lot. I think you did a great job with the narrative. It's a very cerebral piece which I dig. Your pacing is really on point too. What I commend you for is taking a risk. I think when you're roleplaying week to week it's easy to fall into a formula for what works, so kudos to you for trying something different and expanding the character.
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