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This, right? No? Anybody?
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Stevie Tyler Offline
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#1
06-28-2013, 08:15 AM

Emissary

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06-28-2013, 08:28 AM

Good start, I wanted more description of where your character was and what his surroundings were etc. What he was wearing and stuff. I like it when the writer paints a picture for my imagination. Nice dialogue though.
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06-28-2013, 08:30 AM

Thanks! I'll mull that over with the next one.
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