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**04-13-2015, 05:04 AM**

Give feedback, earn money, help Muddy!

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=19514

**Vincent Lane** · **04-13-2015, 05:20 AM**

I like it, man. The character is unique enough that it's interesting, and you come up with some good colloquialisms to use throughout.

It's funny even though it's over the top - maybe BECAUSE it's over the top.

I probably need more back story to understand why Muddy is travelling with his daughter and such, but other than that I really liked it.

**04-13-2015, 05:55 AM**

Thanks Vinnie,
I posted my first RP in the feedback forum about a week ago- no one gave feeback though. This gives a lot more of Muddy's back story if you're interested:
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=19471

**Vincent Lane** · **04-13-2015, 06:12 AM**

Oh, cool... I never actually saw that. I'l check it out later.

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