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#1
08-19-2014, 04:07 AM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14457

gimme a hell, gimme a yeah, gimme some feedback!
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08-19-2014, 03:40 PM

Well yeah, fuck all of you.
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08-19-2014, 03:48 PM

I liked it. It had nothing to do with me, obviously, but it's good to see some real interaction between opponents. I thought it was believable and well written, but I admittedly don't know much about the character.
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08-19-2014, 03:48 PM

Wait Steve Davids is Archie! What a twist!

Kidding, seeing as you gave me some kind words, I'll do the same. You're trash talk is spot on, great work with that. But honestly I was expecting more of a story from Davids, maybe you're building up to that. I don't know. But yeah, your RP was great.
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08-19-2014, 03:51 PM

My work is usually almost entirely story based, but I thought I would see how I could do with a more trash talk based approach in the early parts of this week. Thanks for your feedback though man!

Thanks Loverboy, I would give you a brief of the character but he's been around for 18 months now so it could take a while. Means a lot though guys, cheers!
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08-19-2014, 05:21 PM

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