Please Login or Register to get full access to the forums.

Lost Password? —
Current time: 06-09-2024, 04:00 AM (time should display as Pacific time zone; please contact Admin if it appears to be wrong)                                                                


X-treme Wrestling Federation » XWF OOC » Out Of Character (OOC) Board
Thread Rating:
  • 0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Feedback wanted! One of Us. Feedback, please.
Author Message
Nico LaVey Offline
The Prince of Vice


XWF FanBase:
Drug addicts, rebels, weirdos
(the villain you love to hate; has cult following; may deal drugs on side)
 XWF Roster Page
Joined: Fri Jul 03 2015
Posts: 187
47,801
Likes Given: 48
Likes Received: 90 in 61 posts
Hates Given: 9
Hates Received: 15 in 12 posts
Hates Given: 9
Hates Received: 15 in 12 posts
Reputation: 6
X-Bux: ✘75,005
#1
07-20-2015, 12:39 AM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=20790

PlasterPikeNike, I didn't read your advice until after I finished the promo. I wasn't ignoring your advice, I was just a bit late to reading it..
[Image: zTgZCuO.jpg]

Overall Record: 2-8-1.

1x Federweight Champion.

Shitlist: Izzy Ravenwolf, Nate Higgers.

“We have never heard the devil's side of the story, God wrote all the book.”
― Anatole France
Edit Hate Post Like Post
Roxy Cotton Offline
Head of XWF Shooting Star Division
*********
Administrators


WWW
XWF FanBase:
(.Awaiting user update)
 XWF Roster Page
Joined: Wed Aug 27 2014
Posts: 253
40,960
Likes Given: 84
Likes Received: 150 in 85 posts
Hates Given: 7
Hates Received: 9 in 8 posts
Hates Given: 7
Hates Received: 9 in 8 posts
Reputation: 7
X-Bux: ✘51,170
#2
07-20-2015, 05:32 AM

I enjoyed it. I think I brought out the best you've shown so far in you. Smile

I'm never a huge fan of "trash talk only" promos, but they are what they are, and yours wasn't bad at all.
[Image: pdAMRjn.png]
Hey there daddy...

Roxy's Backstage Pass?
Hate Post Like Post
Nico LaVey Offline
The Prince of Vice


XWF FanBase:
Drug addicts, rebels, weirdos
(the villain you love to hate; has cult following; may deal drugs on side)
 XWF Roster Page
Joined: Fri Jul 03 2015
Posts: 187
47,801
Likes Given: 48
Likes Received: 90 in 61 posts
Hates Given: 9
Hates Received: 15 in 12 posts
Hates Given: 9
Hates Received: 15 in 12 posts
Reputation: 6
X-Bux: ✘75,005
#3
07-20-2015, 06:50 AM

Thanks. Nico just feels a lot more natural than Lucius. I loved Lucius as a character, but I never could figure out the next thing I should write. With Nico, I feel like i'm always thinking 3 steps ahead.
[Image: zTgZCuO.jpg]

Overall Record: 2-8-1.

1x Federweight Champion.

Shitlist: Izzy Ravenwolf, Nate Higgers.

“We have never heard the devil's side of the story, God wrote all the book.”
― Anatole France
Hate Post Like Post




Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)