For those who have reads both of my rp for this week Monday Madness, i want to know if should keep the style i was inspired by Deadpool or if it's a bad idea. I just want to hears a though ^^.

This goes also for those who judge my match. They are welcome to say their though .

I.M.A.O.:: It has a lot of spelling errors, but it's good. I don't know your whole character, but it seems as if you are sticking with your theme. I was a little lost in the middle of it, but got the general idea.

I guess the spelling errors i did forgetting to put a word in a sentence and about my syntax?

it's true i'm french canadian but i need to put a effort on it. If i'm constanly say this, i'll always be in a starting point.