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Anyone? - Haden Oliver Thomas - 01-15-2014
Would love some feedback:
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Anyone? - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 01-15-2014
Alright mate, don't believe we have met... Unless of course, you're someone else with a new character.
Either way, I think we've seen this type of character a million times, but you do bring a fresh tone to the way it's produced. Interesting story, good luck against the King.
Anyone? - Frodo mother fucking Smackins - 01-15-2014
I normally don't post my opinion on here unless it's glowing, but I want to share this one publicly. It was ok, but you're trying to be Tony Stark meets Tony Soprano. You want to be the billionaire play boy with the dirty mouth who can have anyone killed in a second, fine. But the machete toting honeys in lingerie, and the suited thugs with guns that visible was a bit much, in the wrong way. I'm sorry, but it just seemed played out and boring until the dick chopping speech. That just didn't entertain. It was written solidly, though.