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feedback for first one - TheXtremist"Bryce" - 04-20-2013
I realise I am going to have to do three more rp's but anyways thoughts
feedback for first one - TheXtremist"Bryce" - 04-20-2013
nobody
feedback for first one - WhiteLion - 04-21-2013
Good stuff. I would stay away from posting the videos. Just try to focus on telling a story.
Maybe follow a basic format.
Like, tell people where Bryce is and what he is doing. Then maybe, have an XWF camera crew find him where he's at. Let Bryce be interviewed by the crew and in the interview, give some insight into who Bryce is and what he thinks of his opponent.
Also, in your posts, maybe you can try and fill in the blanks people have about what kind of guy Bryce is. Why he's a wrestler, etc.
feedback for first one - TheXtremist"Bryce" - 04-23-2013
Ok thanks